Friday, May 16, 2008

A Poem

I created this poem as I came back from the library today.

    I walked.
    Maple seeds
    soaked on the asphalt.

    They talked.
    Hood drawn,
    I saw their sneakers.

    Rain fell.
    Black shoes
    wet from the drops.

    I walked.
    Hood drawn,
    wet from the drops.

3 comments:

Catherine Wannabe said...

I love it more everytime I read it! It's tight, engaging and smart. Well done!

lizziiii [: [lEt'S GEt SASSY !] said...

whoa, youre good.

(:

Princess Elwen said...

Hurray!!
My father is a poet!!
:-9